Sideways stranger and solitary dweller pauses at my knee
I don’t move either from my cliffside seat
Awareness, yes, I’m on the verge of acknowledgement,
Of an amorphous, achromatic avian
Apathy
Therein begets a sight
Shallow
Surficial, skin-deep, skeletal even,
Crown to throat, animated in tick-like pivots
Curves to breast then flank
The secondary and tertiary feathers fold stacked
Anatomy
How can bones measure in so few millimeters?
Can a skull so fragile hold anything other than feebleness?
Pity
Born from perceived inferiority
Closeness
Familiarity follows prolonged proximity
Fancy
And certainly the list must be short
Of others the bird has ventured so close to?
Mustn’t it?
Me
Imagined scenarios of an animal
Formulating an assessment of me
It feels drawn too
Bonded
A distaste between us–there can’t exist any
Maybe
There is
Why couldn’t it?
Why wouldn’t it?
Who am I to be so unenlightened?
My skull, not the blackbird’s, is vacant
I’m unable to communicate with its
Telepathy
So many messages brought
Pointless for my deaf sensibilities
Tragic
That there is no rewiring to make the language compatible
Here I’ll remain
Undone, untouched and unwise
He flees then flies
After his beak pinches a french fry
That’d been stuck to my thigh
Sometimes I think they evaluate us to determine if we’ll be available as food any time soon enough for them to wait around.
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Sad day if a bird mistakes us for soon-to-be-dead. What vibe must we have been putting off for that to happen? Hahaha. Thanks for reading and your comment Phil
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“What a dumbass… that fry is not even near her mouth.” ~ bird.
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All the fries belong in the mouth! Everyone knows that. Hugs Kimmy. Your comments make everything better
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Also, we have bones millimeters thick. I love the ear bones!!!
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Ooo good point. Judging someone for being just as fragile as we are ourselves. Nice.
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INNER ear bones, I mean…
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Your poem captured my imagination in a dozen different ways, brilliant.
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I came up short. It wasn’t 13 ways? Or perhaps you have a fear of the number 13? Haha. Just teasing. I’m so glad it was captivating on any level. Thanks for reading and for the lovely compliment ivors
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Oh, it was just easier to say dozen, sounds nicerer !!
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way to bring beauty to something so often looked over
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Thankful for your sweet compliment. That means a lot. Thanks so much for reading omeg
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I will have to read this over and over to fully appreciate it. I love writes like that. 🙂
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Me too. Idek wtf I did exactly. Hahaha. No but seriously. It’s better than DPC could do I hope. But really seriously now thank you for your compliment. So much appreciate. 🙂
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Of course! You did a writing of greatness, is what. 😊
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Thank you for seeing that.
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That’s what I see when I look at any of your writing, or you. 😊
Don’t let it go to your head, though. Lol
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Haha I love how you do that!!
So brilliantly constructed! then that ending! ❤ and 😁 and 🎯
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Yay! A bullseye from Vanessa! Awww thank you sweetheart. So glad the ending tickled you like it did to me too. Thanks for reading so much girl
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It sure did, I loved it!! All of it!! I mean, I totally pictured you laughing as you wrote it haha but if I were you I would first be feeling a little awesome about myself for writing everything preceding it lol.
And you are always welcome! My pleasure! ❤
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Awwwe ❤ ❤ ❤
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I befriended a blackbird once, and he got so friendly that he’d sit close by and sing. I’d give him food, and he’d blink at me; staring as he ate the scraps — suspicious always. Once he came by, and I had not a crumb of food. He must’ve taken it as an insult for he crapped as he flew off and nearly got my head. I considered myself lucky.
You write well. Words flow in earnest energy.
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They always come back to take more don’t they, the vultures of the world. And wow that is a great compliment to get. Grateful to get it from you especially. Thank you so much. Watch for falling shit!
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I had a lot of fun reading this.
Do you man to use “too” in the line about being drawn? I forget the line number and can’t look at it in the WP app while I type.
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Thank you so much. Glad it entertained. Appreciate you asking about the line bc it’s good feedback. Yes I did mean too as in the bird and the speaker are curious about each other (Or so she/he thinks) but yeah the line is confusing. I experimented a few times with writing a poem super fast just to see what would come out. I’m still not sure how it went but I don’t think it’s horrid. Not great either when a writer puts too little time and thought into something. I’ll probably switch back to flash fic soon. Thanks for reading. I appreciate it. 🙂
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I liked it. Don’t change it.
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Thanks Jake. That helps me quiet the “you’re not good enough” voices. Hahah
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*high fives you* brilliant!
And apologies…my schedule has been hectic to say the least…we will talk soon 🙂
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Thanx! No apology necessary I understand but appreciate you being here and for the support. It means a lot! I’m so surprised you liked this one! I was unsure. Experimenting lately. 🙂 hope you’re well Joe
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Never be afraid to experiment!! xo
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Reblogged this on Fictionspawn Monsters.
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Oh, hell yeah! thank you for that Aak! yaaayy!
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Thank you for writing 🙂
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13 ways? You’re right! I counted them… Amazing Abstraction! ♥
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hahhhahhah thank you for the compliment! and for giving it a read! appreciate it
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Ouch. Watch that thigh with the fry being taken on the fly.
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that’s gonna leave a mark! hahah. thanks for reading!
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Your poem is beautiful. If only we were more willing to learn from our fellow creatures.
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thank you so much for the compliment. i have always wondered how much or how little should or could we gain from observing animals. do they know something I don’t? appreciate you giving my poem a read!
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Nice one … references a Wallace Stevens poem … link here:
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/45236/thirteen-ways-of-looking-at-a-blackbird
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I believe you are the first one to know the reference! Thank you so much for putting the link here and for giving my poem a look-see. 🙂
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Yours was highly original, I should add, very much complementing the Stevens poem!
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ohhhhhhhh thank you !!! wow. that’s great to hear! 🙂
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