Find meat stuck in teeth of glaze-eyed Beasts,
Of prey from some dangerless lands,
Pluck out what was left from unprincipled feasts,
And show them the fibrous strands.
Upon seeing these, it’d cause no unease,
Save for those with the conscience of rams,
To dismantlers by degrees, as dutch elm disease,
In unremorseful-laden hands.
Find wings that cling under nails of Werethings,
From the backs of fledgeling targets,
Scrape out what was clawed from their playthings,
And show them how aimless they marked it.
Upon seeing this, there’d be nothing amiss,
Unless they had the heart of a lamb,
To selfish-seekers, as a bloodsucking kiss,
In unhonored-laden hands.
The conduct of Beasts and Werethings
Shall have no dominion in me;
Integrity from within reigns and rings,
Except not occasionally.
Wow! I love the way you used the word Were things ❤ There is a darkness hidden away inside you 🙂
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Thank you! That was my favorite word in the poem. yeah i like it dark. I thought of it the other day because Ward Clever and I were joking and I told him I turn into an ogre at midnight and he said “so you’re a wereogre” and i was like oh! I’ll use the word werethings. after i posted the poem, i googled the word and it turns out it was kind of a thing but i can’t remember where. in a game or something? isn’t it cool when you think of something and then someone else has already too?
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Tablet made it 2 words, sigh… Werethings
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A nice and gory description of a beast feasting , I suppose ungregarious is the word, haha, not sure though.
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To say the least! That’s the nice way of putting it. Hahah. Thanks so much for the compliment. I like things a tad gory
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Have you viewed , Slasher Monster Magazine, if not I’d recommend the site, another area for your intriguing work to be published in.
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Can you please reply to this with a link? Thank you!!!
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Just type in, slashermonster.com in wordpress search Discover, and that should get you there. I’ve just recently subscribed, and still bumbling my way, haha, being of the olderer generation, and only 8 years on, in is this computer world, hehe……..
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no problem! thank you!
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my pleasure
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This was like Tolkien meets Shel Silverstein at a Lovecraft convention. Fantastic!
And I love being an inspiration for one of your words. You’re an inspiration 🙂
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Dear WC…this needs to be the tagline to my whole blog or at least the mantra by which I write from now on! ahhhhhh hahhaahha! Thank you best comment!!! appreciate it 🙂 🙂
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You’re very welcome. I call it like I see it.
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keep calling. i’ll pick up even if you have a complaint
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I can’t imagine what I would complain about.
Your clever turns of phrase are not unnoticed. 🙂
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Can you be a little bit nicer please? Sheesh!!! 😉
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No.
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Totally kidding. Please laugh. I’m thankful soo very much
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Me too! I did laugh. 🙂
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add….and they had a threesom with Dylan Thomas and we’ve got everything covered.
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Even better!
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i can’t spell
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I am fluent in typo, lol
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Werethings. IMO, a nice derivative of Werewolf. Clever. I’ll remember that one.
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Thank you ! I promise I thought it up myself but later googled it and it existed as like fanfiction for a video game? can’t remember. I didn’t read carefully. but apparently it’s not a widespread word bc everyone keeps saying they’ve never heard it anyway i appreciate your comment
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I’ve never heard the word! You DID make it up! But…like tracing English back to Latin…my mind looked for the root of the meaning…jumped right to Werewolf, rightly or wrongly!
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This was great! Loved it! 🙂
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Thank you Joseph! I’m so glad you liked it. Your writing is great so if I held your attention then I’m humbled.
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This tale did hold my attention! And no…I am humbled by YOUR opinion on my writing…thank you! 🙂 BUT…I am looking and cannot find it, so…may I ask for your name so I can properly say thanks? lol
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Aww, thank you again! and Absolutely you may. My name is Rachel. Nice to know another fellow writer. 🙂
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Hi Rachel! A pleasure to meet you and officially say both thanks and hi 🙂
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Jo. Holy shit. I just went to your blog and picked a short story of yours to read (from your publications) and I read “Lullaby.” My God I loved it so much. Skillful story telling, art in every line and a terrifying image in each as well. I’m a fan. I have so much more improving to do to come up to this level. I got chills because, not to make this about me, but I wrote a story where a creepy lullaby is sung and slowly revealed throughout the story too. So I was so glad to enjoy a story of my own personal taste. I also wrote a story about two men waking up chained and imprisoned in a pit as well. (both are on this blog ). I can’t wait to read more of your short stories. That is my favorite format since I was a child–short fiction.
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Hi Rachel! Thank you!! 🙂 I’m glad you enjoyed Lullaby. I had a great time writing it lol I want to read the stories you just mentioned! You can always email me to talk more of each other’s writing if you’d like. authorjosephpinto@gmail.com
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I sincerely appreciate it and I will probably be taking you up on that. 🙂 🙂
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I hope you do! 🙂
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This is fantastic. So clever! That last line made me laugh out loud.
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Oh and that picture is rather adorable actually. I couldn’t help thinking of that sloth in Iceage, whatsisname darn it?!?
SID!!! That’s his name.
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Thank you. I liked it bc it’s like he could be the victim in the poem (the prey) but I also picture his claws coming out and his fangs barring sometimes too
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hahaha you should always beware the cute ones 😉
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Omg! Yes! That is so it right there
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Yayyy! I’m so happy! That’s exactly what happened to me when I wrote it. It’s like this speaker carries on at length about opportunists and monstrous people, how heartless and sickening they are! How dare they and they don’t even! I’d never dream of stooping to that …except sometimes. Hahaha. Thanks for reading and for your comment SNTC!!!
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haha it was the perfect setup! Love it. And such great poetry!
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Thankewwwwwww!!!
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This is a really good poem. I love the assonance in the line ‘Find wings that cling under nails of Werethings’ – I can almost hear nails and talons clawing in the night 🙂
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I’m in shock. A blogger of your magnitude and literary caliber complimenting my poem? Full disclosure: I worked so hard on this poem to the point that I felt almost embarrassed about the amount of time spent and the fact that it has not even touched on excellence. Also, prayers answered–another wordpresser who appreciates the intentional use of literary devices! Huzzah. So happy you came to visit my blog today. I remember, for a fact, reading several pieces on your blog, specifically about some James Joyce and classic, sacred poetry. I am so appreciative to get your comment today. Your criticism, positive or negative, is extremely valuable to me. Thanks again! Looking forward to continued, mutual blogship with you. 🙂
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The pleasure is all mine! Your poetry’s excellent – it’s obvious you’ve worked at it because the imagery and language (that assonance among other things) work together very effectively. I look forward to reading more – and thanks for reading our posts! 🙂
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Thanks again for reaching out. Writing is sacred to me and I’m trying to improve bit by bit. Yes, you’re welcome. Your blog is very important and rare. 🙂
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Thank you! That means a great deal. And absolutely, the best way to become a great writer is to keep at it, practising every day 🙂
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You are seriously unique and I am all aswoon here. I’m glad I was hanging onto Vanessa’s skirts and then fell off at your door. Grabbed onto someone’s shoe as they hurried in then overstayed my welcome. That’s me, wanting to overstay my welcome on your site. Damn you are good!
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Normies: I’m glad I found your blog.
Diana: I’m glad I clung to a skirt and flew down and hitched a ride in a shoe and swung inside your door and stayed as long as I please!
Yay! 🙂 ❤ ❤
Thank you so so so much D!
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Haha! Well if you put it that way I do seem fabulously odd don’t I!?
Have an awesome day … see you posted but I’m at work so will peek later.
😊❤️
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