How speak the torn, seizured in thought,
Into the carpet, as they’re taught?
When knees are scabbed, foreheads are bruised
Against synthetic fibers, boozed,
Which side will win the battle there,
The voice of light or of despair?
How speak the weary, beaten down,
Into a screen in her nightgown?
When bags are heavy under eyes
And will is nearly paralyzed,
What is there left for her to do,
And will that be a let-down too?
How speak the angry, wicked thumbed,
Into the fearful ears of some?
When hurt is turned to vengeful pride
And children watch through widened eyes,
What point is served there behind fists,
In binding victims by the wrists?
How speak the nose-turned arrogant,
Into hot air where it is spent?
When eye rolls, head shakes, disregards,
Tally markings on scorecards,
Meet all pretension has in store,
What words are heard when they’re ignored?
How speak the dead, when time ran down,
Into the damp-soiled underground?
When seconds lessened into years
Yet time, the least of all our fears,
Unnoticed, passed us by in haste.
Had all our lives become a waste?
Love it! Great stuff! You’ve got my follow. Check out my comedy blog and give it a follow if you like it!
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Thank you. I read one of your posts and enjoyed it. Looking forward to more. Have you ever read One More Thing by B.J. Novak? I think you’d love it and it could inspire more of your comedy.
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Thank you so much! No I have not read it, you have piqued my interest though and I will have to check it out. Thanks so much for the suggestion!
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Good
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Thank you!
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OHMYGOD! I love this
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sweeeeeeet!! i wrote this in like 90 seconds (your hyperbole is rubbing off on me)
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Reblogged this on Crowd Bewitcher and commented:
Rachel Kallembach, a dear friend and a wonderful writer, poet, editor, wrote this. Love this poem so very much ❤
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I loved this! 🙂
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yay! I appreciate your time. And I’ll be damned if it didn’t take me but 5 minutes to laugh my melancholy ass off at a few of your blog posts. huzzah! excellent stuff
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Thank you! That’s great. I have two ways of dealing with stress – surreal humor and morose poetry. I use them both, lol.
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right on. my kind of stress relievers
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It’s too bad I need the stress to generate the stress relievers. 😦
I probably have one about vampires in there somewhere. lol
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you’re in luck–stressers are aplenty in everyone’s life. don’t fret. haha. bring on the vamps
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I’m lucky to be stressed, for sure, creativity-wise. lol
You want the Vamps? Here you go:
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HAaaaa ha. niiiice
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It’s also a good song. I wouldn’t spring some sonic disaster on you. 🙂
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certainly not–Sonic disasters are reserved for those moments when a hedgehog falls in a pit of spikes and loses all his golden rings, OR when a roller skating Sonic waitress falls and hits her head on the curb while serving you your cheeseburger at the drive-up. Those…those are Sonic disasters.
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Well-played! I’m impressed. 🙂
And a Semisonic disaster is any song other than Closing Time?
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HAHAHHAH. you one-uped me. aaaaand we maxed out the embedded replies Ward. good times!
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You might have to raise the limit just so we can communicate – because I just saw this. I’m all about the notifications. I need them to survive. haha
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Honestly I set it to the max allowed. 10. or so that’s what i thought. maybe i can up it. i’ll check the setting. hehehhee
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It could depend on your theme, or something. I don’t know. My theme has seemingly infinite capacity for comments. I forget how I did it.
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pull down menu only goes to 10. doesn’t wordpress understand that I just can’t shut up that easily though? hahhaha
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It needs a snooze button on the 10 limit. Just five more comments, ma!
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AHAHAHAAAH. 10 with an extension of 5 if necessary after review of an unseen judge
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“I’ll allow it.” Yes! I told you!
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Awesomeness
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Thankyouness!!!
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